Hi folks, have you ever wondered why you may still be getting stains on your teeth regardless of how much you brush and floss those pearly whites? Could it be possible that you're eating some foods that have been proven to stain your teeth? I have posted a list of foods and drinks to avoid from Netscape Home and Living, if you can't avoid them, the best way to prevent the stains is to brush after consumption. http://webcenters.netscape.compuserve.com/homerealestate/package.jsp?name=fte/stainteeth/stainteeth
If you have stains the best way to get rid of them is to brush, floss and whiten your teeth.
Next week's blog will be about the pros and cons of whitening your teeth, stay tuned!
I really like your background, but I would try to figure out how to include your logo in here somewhere. I would also shorten up the "About Me" section, it gets kind of long and winds up looking messy on the sides of your posts. In general I like the post but I think we were supposed to do an introductory first post, like basically repeating your "About Me" in a post. Overall great job!
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ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job making sure you clearly indicated your business name. Its very bold and very easy to see and read. Its great that you disclaimer is on the very top of your profile. Another thing that I liked was how you put your personal life into the About Me. It gets your readers to know that you do care about what you are doing. You also did great with the great job describing the founding of the business. Lastly, your blog has a very good flow and I like how you kept the same color though out the page. Great job.
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ReplyDeleteYour blog looks very clean and is easy to follow. Everything you were required to have on your blog is clearly there. I enjoyed reading your about me section because it really shows your passion for your business. The only things I would do differently would be, add your logo, and maybe tie more colors or some pictures in because all the blue makes things blend together a little much. Otherwise great job!
You are very in depth with who you are and what your business is about. Also, your name is clearly stated. I enjoyed reading your blog and am excited for future posts. I would suggest the same thing as Emily with your about me section. Instead of shortening it up though, I would just rearrange your layout as to make it look more clean. I really like your background and wish I could see it more. Maybe make your white background a little more transparent and then bolder font so that it's easy to read, you can see your background and the white isn't as hard on the eyes. Thanks for letting me know this is for a fake company. I can see you are excited about the topic however and have a lot of knowledge to share. You did a great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you Emily, Aubrey, Hailey, and William for your feedback, I will be making some adjustments to my blog.
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